
Animals deserve equal rights
Horatio Gipson
I used to think all animals were loved and cared for but now I believe animals aren’t always treated well, so we have to help the ones that aren’t being cared for. I believe all animals should be loved and appreciated instead of them being abused and beaten and put into homes and places where people don’t appreciate them or care for them.
I started believing this after I watched a youtube channel that saved and cared for animals that were beaten and abandoned.
What happened after that day I wondered how animals were being treated like this so I found more videos about that subject and I i noticed that 8.1 million animals were abandoned that year.
It made me feel bad for the animals because some of them were like 2 months old with no family because they either died or got separated from them.
But this isn’t really about trying to make you feel sad, it’s about making you see through the animals eyes so that you can get a piece of their lives and their points of view.
And see what they go through so you could find some respect for them. In a world where we have love and hate I think , we need to give people but also animals the love that they deserve.
You can see when animals are abandoned zoos and in corrupt magician shows. That’s why I believe Animals deserve equal rights because they love and care just like us. Maybe if we all try to help animals get out of the not so good situations there would be less homeless and beating animals.
Writer's Statement
The main belief I wrote was about Animals having equal rights.A story I shared to illustrate this belief was when I was about eight and I found this youtube channel that would get either homeless , neglected or beating dogs. And they would put the Animal in a home after,the a little while later there as good as new.The reason why i choose this belief and story was because it really made think what happens to the Animals that get neglected so i researched and found out it was six million of them at the time, mind you it was 2016.The reason why this was so important to me is because i felt like i had to figure out a way to help more of those Animals . When I started my essay it was basically just talking about my past with this certain situation.I chose to start this way so you could see what I see. Also here are 3 details I added to my essay. A specific detail I added to my story was when I said Animals deserve equal rights because the love , Appreciate and care just like us. Now one person who inspired my writing was Frankie because I over heard her talking a certain situations like the one im taking about which made me remember all the stuff i was talking about.A specific technique that i used from ruby was adding my past to the essay.A change that i made while revising was the subject because i did not know that much about what i have now.